I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Friday, 28 June 2013

Writing sample

I was just on the phone when i when to my room and my bed was gong it was like there was a gost in the house and herd some one runing in the house it was just my cat i thot and it was 12pm at nitge and there was blood on the wall i herd a door shut it was lowd and i called the ploce and then i herd  some    one  say  i can see you but I got my gun and shot the man he just  i just wat some money and he fall to the grow and it was a happy endin

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